Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Paparoa Range School in Dobson, Greymouth, New Zealand.
Hi Jordy, You have written a very powerful image when you describe the volcano as coughing. It almost makes the volcano seem human.
I like all of the interesting facts but next time you could add some more stuff abat the volcano.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi Jordy, You have written a very powerful image when you describe the volcano as coughing. It almost makes the volcano seem human.
ReplyDeleteI like all of the interesting facts but next time you could add some more stuff abat the volcano.
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