Wednesday 1 March 2017

Starting School

IALA recounts.

I have worked hard to add detail to my ideas.

I saw a huge playground full of kids playing in the playground.
On the playground I saw shapes and I saw a flying fox, it had a grey handle. I was so excited and I wanted to go on the flying fox.

2 comments:

  1. Jordy you have worked hard in writing today. I like the way you told me about the grey handle.

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  2. Hi Jordy I like the way you added detail to your work about the flying fox.

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